|Reviews for The Slender Games|
| megagulper 3/18/13 . chapter 1
Its good story. I like how a lot its unknown, and he clashes two of the scariest thing I could think of
| Jack Nightingale 1/17/13 . chapter 1
Great descriptive writing! I really love how you describe everything!
However, just one point:
Try not to jump into the story too quickly, I know it's hard (from personal experience) but sometimes try to write a little bit of an intro perhaps?
Despite this, great piece mate!