I was intrigued from the very beginning and enjoyed a good quick plot and finish

argh, when the ketchup came in...ewwwww so gross.
This is so awesome! But so gross, But so awesome! HAHAHAHA I love it, Are you going to continue? It would be really interesting to continue with this idea, like how weird they are and ahhhh other stuff!

SO SORRY, I'm such an idiot X3 I sent an anon review I forgot to log in. HAHAHA, still love your stories! 3