Short as this is, it is most certainly brilliant. I love how the rhyme scheme shifts as the person in the poem seems to get more and more agitated, and I adored the word choice. Really awesome poem, you should be very pleased with it :)

The way you work words is amazing. I really love the way your poetry is structured. A very relatable piece, brilliant job! :-D

Oh my God.

You just summed up like everything I feel every time I have those fleeting moments of 'holy fucking Jesus Christ I can't do this, why am I even here, everyone else can cope and this is just no and ugh'.

This is amazing. :O

STOP.