|Reviews for Forget Me Not|
| Anesidora 10/9/12 . chapter 2
These two lines:
"I always found that so ironic, so bitterly twisted, it was like a cosmic joke and I wasn't told the punchline."
"'Alex. It's me, this is me you're talking to. I'm not going to leave you.' 'Why not?'"
...broke my heart. However, if I'm being honest I think you can so much better - still loved it though.
| Anesidora 10/9/12 . chapter 1
The way you write really is heartbreaking; there's a distance in your writing that I'm not sure is meant to be intentional or not, but it causes me to feel as if I (as the reader) am reading/witnessing something in a dairy, knowing that I shouldn't be but unable to stop going just a little further. Typical child caught with their hand in a cookie jar scenario. It's a glimpse at a longer, deeper story that I may not know or understand but it draws me into wanting to find out. It's lovely, and sad, and so full of hurt. I don't know how to finish this, selfishly I found it too short (but maybe it's better this way) but I can't wait for more?