Great work yet again.

I somehow got child abuse from this - what with the "Father is a solid mass of hands and face and mouth" line. Perhaps I'm reading it wrong but her Father seems like a nasty character anyway. I like the way you compare him to a ghoul, although he is alive - because he is just evil to the core. Yet to his neighbours, friends, he is almost "invisible" like a ghoul - because they don't see him for what he really is.

Great! I love how your poetry evokes images and makes you think long after you're done reading.

You have a talent.

Great job!