|Reviews for Blood Magic|
| Anonymous United 10/5/12 . chapter 1
Interesting idea...The last bit confused me, but other than that it was a really nice chapter :)
I see you've worked on the "line format" thing that I commented on in a different story of yours too. There was a definite improvement in the beginning, although you kind of slipped back to it by the end of the chapter.
Other than that, great work!