I was wandering through your stories and I really couldn't find one I wanted to read, so I took a chance and just clicked on a random one.
I have to say, it's refreshing to find someone writing in true play format (sans props) as opposed to just a running dialogue. This was very well written, and also just vaque enough to be consistently interesting. The moral questions posed by P are enough to propel the whole sene, but the addition of a backstory, undefined as it is, ives it a very stark depth.
Keep writing- Vis Verbi

Reading this had made me think and it made me sad. Why sad? Because he had lost his wife and I couldn't help think that he would still be loved. I just did think that while reading this.