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| Reviews for Kingdom of Cards |
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   Marie Katrin 10/8/12 . chapter 1Interesting premise. Research the term 'Mary Sue' and keep that in mind while you write, which is something I suggest to many people. Otherwise, like I said, vdery, very interesting. |
| Ophelia Schmit 10/6/12 . chapter 2 It IS interesting. Keep going! -Hermie |
| Ophelia Schmit 10/6/12 . chapter 1 It's too short for me to critique, anything, honestly. But I'll read what's next, you've started an interest for me to want to know more. -Hermie |
