|Reviews for Kingdom of Cards|
| Marie Katrin 10/8/12 . chapter 1
Interesting premise. Research the term 'Mary Sue' and keep that in mind while you write, which is something I suggest to many people. Otherwise, like I said, vdery, very interesting.
| Ophelia Schmit 10/6/12 . chapter 2
It IS interesting. Keep going!
| Ophelia Schmit 10/6/12 . chapter 1
It's too short for me to critique, anything, honestly. But I'll read what's next, you've started an interest for me to want to know more.