I love this story but you seriously need to go over and correct the typos etc.

AWWWWW! I so hate to see this story go! I loved everything and it was a very original concept for me. I agree with Liam, that was the best present ever. They just belong together. I still feel bad for Olivia, but I am happy for Lucy. Liam has everything that he has ever wanted and it is all with the person he loves beyond his life. I agree that they left the past in the past and are only forcing on their present and future.

Thank you, thank you, thank you Maggie for the shout out! Aww shucks...Lol! Please keep writing! I will definitely be here to read! Smooches!

I love Vivienne! Pay up!...LOL! I love this story!

Amazing story. You did a great job writing this love story, can't wait for the other chapters.:)

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I knew it! AWWWWW, yay! Their getting married...well at least he asked her. These guys are just too cute. And Vi is too funny...can you say dropped the ball. She so did that on purpoose, but knowing Liam and Lily, they would be still beating around the bush while Lily's at the airport going back. I think Lily should stay. Everyone is right there even though they may run into Olivia. They should be with their families, but Liam could go with her to get everything setup for her move so they could see the sights together. Kind of a pre-honeymoon honeymoon...LOL! Love this chapter! Please keep writing!

Excellent chapter. You did a wonderful job with Olivia. Very classy, but still getting the point across. I love her last line: No. I won't" She said "Not now. One day though" She shrugged "One day I'll be"...it told Liam that while I may not be yelling and scream ing and beating the crap out of you right now, I am still very hurt and just like you did not get over Lily in a day, it will take me some time as well, but I will get there. Very strong young woman. Too cute about the having his baby and even his answer. If she looked into it, he never said would have his baby, but he said she would have one someday. She just took the one to be his, while it appeared he meant it in general. I have that happy sad feeling right now, but in a good way. So please keep writing! Is this the end of the story or will we get through the wedding to see how Liam and Lily work out their future? Either I would be happy. This chapter's ending alludes to a happy ever after so that's good. Please keep writing! Would love to see more story from you!

Yay! and Sad all at the same time! Yay because they are together again which is how it should be. Sad because Olivia is going to be so hurt. Big ups to Lily for at least acknowledging the fact that Olivia's feelings should be considered. Oh this is going to be something else. Can't wait for the next chapter...poor Olivia! Hopefully she is crazy... Keep Writing!

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I like it!

Oh, I feel so sorry for Lily and Liam. They just need to get together and be obwith it. I know Olivia will be hurt, but Liam's dad is right...what good will it do for Liam to keep pretending to love Olivia. Why go through the motions when in the end she will know that he doesn't love her fully. They will both have wasted time. Please keep writing!

Right now I'm jealous sis. You really know how to write and create a good story. I loved their first kiss!

Love this chapter! Keep writing and posting here please.
I'm so curious to see the end! Great job sis.
Kiss Kiss :)

Please update soon! I have know if they finally get together or not! They obviously are still in love and I know Olivia will be hurt, but...oh please just update and put me out of my misery! Love this story! Great job for English not being your first language! Keep posting!

Please finish. I like this story. It's sad, but refreshing at the same time. I hate for Olivia to be hurt, but Lily and Liam need to be together! They have wasted too much time as is! Keep writing!

How come if he had loved her so much, he hooked up with someone else so quickly? Come on! Plus she sounds like a real pushover..no backbone at all...a real sad sack.