Whats going on to Raven? Cliff hanger!

So she can trigger elementals to find her with her Aether power? Raven's a pretty cool character too, but I had to lol at that one line: "I hate saying his name"
I thought of harry potter when they kept saying "he who must not be named!" that's irrevant to this review, but oh well.
I can't wait to read about the other elementals!

Good start, I want to meet the other 'elements'.

Ah, this is interesting. I'm glad you started the action early, and not take like several chapters to start it, like some people do. I like this character Elena, maybe it's because she's lost a lot and still standing, or running now lol. I'd love to read more.

I love how the story junps straight into the action! Elena reminds me of the princess of heart or a keyblade wielder in Kingdom Hearts, its awesome!

ooh! I'm really looking forward to reading more! So far its a great read! :)