Pretty interesting read. I like how you built the targets so we know who they are, why you need to go after them, etc. One part I didn't "buy" was when Gabriel held his hand on Sho's forehead and started chanting to extract the information. Why would Sho allow that without a reaction?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Very good read, it pulls you in. Need to watch those typos and edit edit edit before posting. :)
I like the translation too for those of us who don't speak Japanese. Also, the third target was mistakenly labeled second. One has to wonder what Kiran called about, and if Gabriel would get back to his brother. The glow colors are so cool. The fight sequence is also excellent. I am ready and eager to read about the next targets!

great story

i like this story. keep it up