Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. I adore the diction. Perfect.

Hey!

Me again :D I'm not a stalker, honest.

Another fantastic poem! I have told you before but seriously, I love how you layout your poetry. Like the "July is gagging me" bit - it's like how it makes you read it slower almost as if you're gagging yourself. It's awesome.

Anyway, I also enjoyed your use of language here. I particulary liked the description of the comet "dilating in someone elses orbit" - beautiful!

You have a way with words, it's beautiful to read.

I can't really think of much else to say other than well done on another great poem! :D