|Reviews for July|
| classic violet 11/11/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. I adore the diction. Perfect.
| Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know 10/13/12 . chapter 1
Me again :D I'm not a stalker, honest.
Another fantastic poem! I have told you before but seriously, I love how you layout your poetry. Like the "July is gagging me" bit - it's like how it makes you read it slower almost as if you're gagging yourself. It's awesome.
Anyway, I also enjoyed your use of language here. I particulary liked the description of the comet "dilating in someone elses orbit" - beautiful!
You have a way with words, it's beautiful to read.
I can't really think of much else to say other than well done on another great poem! :D