I don't know the meaning to such a poem, but it truly screams you, Naver.

Elegant metaphors bring us to something darker, something I still have yet to find in this poem, but nonetheless, it's emotional and deep, somehow.

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

this poem tells almost exactly how i feel right now. it's amazing.

Yes you know me as xXTheOtakuFaeryXx but now I'm sticking with my nickname. She is cause I'm a girl, chan is cause it's the Japanese honorific that I chose to use. Anywayyyy, this was good and I really liked it. (ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

I don't really know the meaning but, again, it was SO CREATIVE! O.O
I like the way it rhymed, slightly eerily, and reminded me of a beautiful, twisted nursery rhyme in a way :3
To me the poem was quite literal - showing my complete lack of insight - and about a strange wonderland-esque world where we hide behind walls of glass and it's only a matter of breaking them...
Ooh that sounded creepy. Probably not as creepy as I hope.
Anyway: AMAZING :D

this is a very good set of poems it was poems like these that inspired me to write my own

"It's amazing how I still can chock." I believe you meant "choke."
Other than that, this is quite and interesting piece. I enjoyed it.

You are a very talented poet. I usually don't like rhyming poems, but this one touched me. I like the way you use metaphors, it spices up any point an author tries to put across. Great job.