i love it

Hm. Details where you want them, and an action prologue in my opinion is the best prologue. However, I have some questions.
"as u stand" You? Or I stand there?
It doesn't seems like more than three characters are actually there.
Mistakes. You have some.
How is this narrator a being of the Light if he "takes in the SCENT of demon"?
What a very self-righteous vamp hunter demon thing.
Love it or hate it, I guess.

I found this interesting as it went right into the action of the story. I found it an interesting read.

I can't wait to read the rest! :D