Very good! I love it and cant wait for the next chap!

A real surprise I never saw it coming. Expecting some more burned out house etc. Also it has the reader with several interesting directions to consider. Thanks for sharing I really like this. doncat aka donsilvercat The handling of details makes it come alive.
A few typos like "o" for "to"

Wow nice work! Are you going to continue this? If so i would be really glad!

very realistic and moving(makes you feel like you were there also. Excellent composition all the nice things about spelling, punctuation, grammar are in place (except for cill where it should be sill) Its almost as if it was autobiographical (I hope not). don aka donsilvercat aka doncat

Tragic, however, you said very few things weren't affected. Is the window sill one of them?

-Hermie