|Reviews for Evil and the Hybrid|
| Dawnseclipse327 12/31/12 . chapter 3
I'm so happy you updated! Oh no her sister was bitten and when I read the part about the virus wiping out half the population I was thinking "oh wow jeez" hope you update soon!
| E.A. Scott 10/13/12 . chapter 2
Nice chapter. I like how you gave a bit of Rowena was as a human just a little before the outbreak.
| Dawnseclipse327 10/10/12 . chapter 2
The two characters introduced seem quite cool. I wanna know whats gonna happen next, this is great!
| freddyburn 10/10/12 . chapter 2
Not a lot to say about this chapter except: WAHOO, I got a mention.
Ahem, sorry. Moving on.
Liked the banter between the sisters. The chapter was short and brief, and I can see you are building on the foundations you have layed in the previous chapter.
One slight thing- maybe more description of the characters and their surroundings. A brief indicator of physical attributes perhaps. For example: "I brushed a strand of auburn hair out of my pale blue eyes." or "The lab coat hung loosly off his tall, gaunt frame. He looked paler than normal in the florecent lights boucning from the off green walls."
Just a suggestion.
| Lia Jenson 10/9/12 . chapter 2
Hm. It certainly seems like you're going down the road less traveled here...But I, too, want to know: what DOES one eat when you can't have "meat vegetables or fruit"?!
...Photosynthesize sunlight? Plant zombies...
Can't wait for it! I do wish there was more detail to other characters besides the main one, though. But this IS just the beginning so I'll let it slide.
| obik16 10/9/12 . chapter 2
I really can't wait to see where you're going with this. It seems very interesting and I can't wait to read more
| freddyburn 10/8/12 . chapter 1
Interesting first chapter.
One point No vegetable, meat or fruit? What are they meant to eat?
| Dawnseclipse327 10/8/12 . chapter 1
Whoa i heard of zombie fanfics, but not one where someone is PART zombie! Very creative!
| E.A. Scott 10/7/12 . chapter 1
Wow! That was really good Viola! I like how you previewed a bit of the upcoming story. Overall: Great job!