UPDATEE! PLEASE...PRETTY PLEASE? HEHE!. Seriously i love this story!
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Waaah! Write more please! I looove this story...Chase is a creeper though...please don't tell me Ana's shagging him!
AND I can't wait for Alyssa to give into Cole!

Update soon please!

i need more"! i loce this story loads and you are a great writer :D

Oooh tension?! And what is up with Chase? Her older brother? He's a creep.. Needing more info on him.. But that'll probablt be later in the story ay? Haha nice work :D xx

Interesting story. I can't wait to read what happens next. :D A word of advice: stop using words like "drawled" and "spat" and "hissed" so often. It's getting kind of boring. You've been using "scowled" and "smirked" a lot too. A Thesaurus might help?

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Oh come on horrible cliffhanger they have to have a huge makeout to make up for it. And plz write fast. Ehhhhh so excited :))

OMG! She lied to Ana's face... bad girl..bad brother!
Love love love that Ana's (kinda) a ballerina! Right more please :) xs

I like it :) plz keep writing

Starting to get feelings for Cole... Hmm.. I like the sound of that :) awesome chapter though cant wait for the next :D xx

Nice chapter and even though these are the first few chapters, i have a feeling it'll become more interesting to have Cole and Alyssa keep their secret from Ana.. :) keep up the awesome work :D xx

I love it maybe a lil less language though

Ohhhh! I can't wait to find out her secret! And I wonder what will happen if she finds out Alyssa and Cole had love :)

Ooh I really wanna know! Please please write more Xx

My name's Alyssa! And it's spelled the exact same way! (: Love the story :3

Ahh this is fantastic! You must write more! Ana approves