|Reviews for White Knuckles|
| IAmAnAeroplane 2/9/13 . chapter 4
Lovely lovely lovely! It's great to here that updates will be more frequent (frequenter? I don't know!) and can't wait for next chapter. I have to say this. I know I said I liked Demetri last time, and don't get me wrong I love the parts from his point of view, but I adore Oliver, he is so... Just so god damn awesome!
| HighOnBrokenWings 2/9/13 . chapter 4
Another fantastic chapter :) I did find Jordan's outburst a little t
| IAmAnAeroplane 2/4/13 . chapter 3
So, had to re read beginning, cause as you said it has been a while. I loved how you gave a little point of view from Demetri (excuse my spelling) it gave me a new love and perspective of the 'boy who reeks of cigarettes and pot'. And personally, I love him! Minus the drugs thing. But I love his personality and his 'wooh fucking hoo'! Anyways keep em coming.
| Pseudonym59 2/3/13 . chapter 1
I really like the set-up so far. Jordan and the boy seem to complement each other well (personality-wise). I like how each character has a distinctive voice, but it's not done so that it's overkill.
Really nice job so far. :)
| HighOnBrokenWings 2/3/13 . chapter 3
Can't wait for the next chapter! I would recommend breaking up Jordan's and Demetris POVs with a line to add a bit more clarity. You wrote convincingly in his point of view, which was really great to read. Update as soon as possible!
| HighOnBrokenWings 2/3/13 . chapter 2
You have a really great writing style! But I truly can't stand Jordan! She's arrogant and narrow minded as hell! You do a very good job of making her seem cold and perfectly scientific. Her logic is to the extreme, a large personality flaw that your writing plays at perfectly. As much as this girl frustrates me, I must read on!
| HighOnBrokenWings 2/3/13 . chapter 1
This is a really good first chapter. Jordan's attitude was very negative, it actually made me angry that she could be so convinced in her narrow mindedness! The world needs a balance of what is and what can only be imagined and felt. All mathematics and physics concepts began with an idea. I'm really interested to read the next chapter :)
| InsanityAndBeyond 10/12/12 . chapter 2
I really like this so far!
I really like how you've described your main character, depicting her as annoying but also hinting at her own insecurities which makes her likeable.
Interesting to see how this progresses,
| IAmAnAeroplane 10/10/12 . chapter 2
I like it. Jordan seems a bit... up herself. I still love her! It's great and I can't wait to hear more! :)
| Fay Fibonacci 10/10/12 . chapter 2
I have to admit i am pretty much in love with this story! I really like your style of writing, you explain everything beautifully. Lol i hate and like Jordan at the same time. She seems so annoying, i think I'm more of the Dimitri type, he's cool! Please update soon :)
| Chocolate12345 10/10/12 . chapter 2
hi i like the story. i want to read some more
| Fay Fibonacci 10/7/12 . chapter 1
OMG! What do i like? I LIKE EVERYTHING! This story is super awesome! I love how clear and easy it is to understand, its beautiful! :D PLEASE update soon :)