Lovely lovely lovely! It's great to here that updates will be more frequent (frequenter? I don't know!) and can't wait for next chapter. I have to say this. I know I said I liked Demetri last time, and don't get me wrong I love the parts from his point of view, but I adore Oliver, he is so... Just so god damn awesome!

Another fantastic chapter :) I did find Jordan's outburst a little t

So, had to re read beginning, cause as you said it has been a while. I loved how you gave a little point of view from Demetri (excuse my spelling) it gave me a new love and perspective of the 'boy who reeks of cigarettes and pot'. And personally, I love him! Minus the drugs thing. But I love his personality and his 'wooh fucking hoo'! Anyways keep em coming.

I really like the set-up so far. Jordan and the boy seem to complement each other well (personality-wise). I like how each character has a distinctive voice, but it's not done so that it's overkill.

Really nice job so far. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter! I would recommend breaking up Jordan's and Demetris POVs with a line to add a bit more clarity. You wrote convincingly in his point of view, which was really great to read. Update as soon as possible!

You have a really great writing style! But I truly can't stand Jordan! She's arrogant and narrow minded as hell! You do a very good job of making her seem cold and perfectly scientific. Her logic is to the extreme, a large personality flaw that your writing plays at perfectly. As much as this girl frustrates me, I must read on!

This is a really good first chapter. Jordan's attitude was very negative, it actually made me angry that she could be so convinced in her narrow mindedness! The world needs a balance of what is and what can only be imagined and felt. All mathematics and physics concepts began with an idea. I'm really interested to read the next chapter :)

I really like this so far!
I really like how you've described your main character, depicting her as annoying but also hinting at her own insecurities which makes her likeable.
Interesting to see how this progresses,
update soon!

I like it. Jordan seems a bit... up herself. I still love her! It's great and I can't wait to hear more! :)

I have to admit i am pretty much in love with this story! I really like your style of writing, you explain everything beautifully. Lol i hate and like Jordan at the same time. She seems so annoying, i think I'm more of the Dimitri type, he's cool! Please update soon :)

hi i like the story. i want to read some more

OMG! What do i like? I LIKE EVERYTHING! This story is super awesome! I love how clear and easy it is to understand, its beautiful! :D PLEASE update soon :)