I like the title - pure genius. As for the poem well that is such a great piece. I feel sorry for the speaker in some way because they're always chasing after the happy ending, the horizon, yet to no avail. I feel like they're running away from their problems as well but this is just my opinion.

I love the imagery and I think this is one of your finest yet.

You captured a single moment of ambition to see something through perfectly. I like how it goes from the practicality of a watch to the broad goal of beating the sun. Beautiful Piece! Keep Writing!