OMG Rachel-this was INTENSE and SUSPENSEFUL and DEFINITELY a story that I want more of! You have written it very well indeed and now I just have to know what happens to the queen and the one that was saved, as well as the child that was taken! I really really hope you decide to continue with this story -IT IS AMAZING!

ooooh this is good! :) I strongly believe you should put more of this up! :D