This is awesome. Legit. Though there were a few flaws, don't worry their miniscule. Also, I just want to say that well, one, i just couldn't stop reading because your story's vividness literally dragged me to your character's shoes. Plus, they are very identifiable. The setting is very thought out and love how you told the story of both Lilly and Zsadamh. Very neat!

To wrap this up, in my opinion, this should receive more reviews, no I mean it!

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MegaRdaniels

More like silver stag, not white stag. Nice one though

And Zsadamh killed the girl? o_o