|Reviews for AURORAS LIGHT|
| sofargone11 10/10/12 . chapter 1
a few mistakes in spelling and words. i may edit this before uploading my new chapter.
| Chiisutofupuru 10/10/12 . chapter 1
I can't deside if that was prologue material or chapter one material... I guess it works depending on what's next... oh ya...
" Were we where before "
...this was near the beginning and just sort of comfused me a bit.
That's it, keep going!