This story was published in the paper, as well.

This is prefect for a newspaper story! I hate whenever people leave rude comments on stories. It's called RESPECT.

"It hit me like a brick wall...the faces on the wall."
Repetitive, much? Find a different phrase.
All in all, a lukewarm story that you should probably just read to small children.
In fact, I read this to my little sister and she started crying...with laughter.

pretty good short story