Clap...clap...clap...This is really good! The rhyming scheme is perfect. As you can see I'm a big fan of rhyming poems, and this poem was perfect. It didn't sound campy, irritating or childish like some rhyming poems are. I can see why you got such a great reception at the talent show. I am so loving this poem. Wait...now I have to reread it again, and put this on my favorites. :)