Love the image conveyed, which could indeed have several meanings. Very creative. Well done!

Very interesting and can be interpreted a number of ways (such as what you said in the summary). Fantastic! 3 Keep writing!
Anna

Well, this is different from what I've come to expect
from you, but not too surprising. It seems more of a
"think piece" than an appeal to emotions. So let me
think about it for a while.