D: You killed Lili.
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"as if he's searching my soul"
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Sharp title and description. The concept is weird and creative, such a strange vice; a terrific idea, great start!

This story is really good, you've got me on the hook. Please, please continue it and update quickly. I really like the whole idea of the prostitutes, the dealers and the shackles, you could publish this, you know? Really creative :D