I really like this. Can I do some fan-fiction from it?

I went to New York City a couple days ago and it really remided me of the first few chapters of this story. Besides the nastiest smell I have ever been exposed to for longer time than 3 hours. It was really bad. Either way, the first thing I did when we got back (which was really late) was check thi story and behold it had been updated but I only got through half of it and had to come back to it later. It seemed a bit shorter than the others. It was actually really wierd. I got back from NYC to read a story on a kid from NYC, had subway for dinner than read about the same kid eating subway for breakfast. Then Fletchers speaking French and the whole reason for going to NYC in the first place was to go Au Revoir to someone going to France... just a little wierd. Whatever. This was a bit wierd cause... IDK if you play Zelda at all but there is a line from it. (Now I really want to play Zelda again.) "Can't fight evil on an empty stomach." I used to play that game continuously. (THough I never got that far until this summer. I actually beat the game.) Okay whatever again. I still kinda miss the first few chapters. I always do. It doesn't matter what book, game, or TV series it is. I always miss the first parts.

Oh! Those are my three fav bands.

Oh! Oh! I know a perfect gift for Ignis. He needs some 5 hour energy. Hours of energy now, no two-thirty feeling later... I think I watch too many of those comercials.

So cold... can't even bother with proper grammer. (Shivers) igs so lucky. He doesn't have to shovel the drive and even if he did he'd just havebtobsnap his fingers and poof! Its done. Of course fire can solve most of your problems. Bully at scjool? Torch his ass! Dinnerbisnt cooking fast enough? Turn up the heat.. computer doeant work? Go to the store and blow everything up cept the computer you want. Of course no one bothers to try and find a way to make people actuakky go sanp and have a giant flme magically appear. Oh no people are too held up with americas next fucking top model and which bastards have talent.

yes! it's so pretty. (strokes sword)

Just one day... Hmm... I'm bored I guess I'll reread that chapter of Blessed. (Goes to page) *Gasp* Could it be? He wrote it on time? OMG! He did! Yes!
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Curse my addiction to internet fiction. There's only two I really read but I'm sooo addicted to it there's this depressing feeling everytime I finish a chapter. Then there's another several weeks before the next one comes out. (Can't blame them. I completely abandoned my old writing accounts. I did have a few fans, too.) It's just that... NOONE EVER COMMENTS! (Keyboard breaks from fingers slamming on keys) Oh well. You don't seem to have to long of a waiting period usually. It's okay to occasionally have a longer time waiting. (notices a key doesn't work anymore. Aww great. gunna have to replace the circuit sheet again.)

I like the origin story on how Ignis lost his arm. A creative (and funny) series so far. Keep on writing. :)

Delta327

Soooo tired... Long car rides aren't that bad. I don't know about driving though. (Stupid laws.) The gore in this doesn't tend to affect me too much. I've seen alot of it though so I don't know if that changes anything. I had a charactor like Savanah in one of my short stories for english. Blue hair I mean... I think... Maybe it was pink. Something of the sort.
This may seem random but... Does purple and gold have any significance to you? or like blackbirds and stuff?

This story was real good. From one teenager to another, I really like it. I especially like how Ignis is so crass with describing things, yet he does them in a humorous way. I burst into laughing when I saw "Choo Choo Motherfucker". Anyway, you just earned yourself a follower, Streak.

Delta327

Wouldn't makeing a chapter longer also make it later?

It seems more than a couple people on here know a thing about weapons. (Like N Fox) *cough* its really bad for a blade to be used to stand up. *cough*

(slides knife across stone) I absolutely dont know anything about weapons. (nice katana usage in this story though)

I'm so tired of school. Just wish the stupid conceited "smart" people would just shut up and the assholes would just get sent off to some stupid people place. It's so stupid.
Either way, still lovin this. Although it's driving my head crazy with Ignis being so nice to Artemis then turning around and mugging someone. (Poor guy. Cars are expensive and with this economy...) Can't wait for next chapter. (My friends think I'm a little wierd. I ended up almost ripping my friends throat out for her wifi password so I could read this over at her house. It never came to that but... I probably would've.)

Stop writing this! My brother is going insane because of this. Its scary.