I like it so far and would very much like to read more. :)

This is really disgusting...

Add more! D;

Hmmmmm not bad. I read over it the other day. You might want to look over it and proofread and such but other than that, not bad. The different POVs gave you different perceptions of what happened. Overall: not bad.

It was good, but proofreading is needed. Also, the kiss was filled with passion and longing and I enjoyed reading it. I also liked that it was a flashback sort of thing. Needs some improvement here and there, but good vocabulary. Overall, it's pretty good.