Oooh sort of a cliffhanger :D Lovely update, waiting for more :3

Very interesting story so far! Keep it up! Love the characters btw!

This has progressed nicely and I find I liked this more than I thought I would, even if I have found the dialogue is stiff as hell and awkward at times, and of course it's horrendously easy to predict some of the scares, but it was still nice.

This is an incredible opening chapter! I love Riley-Ann's name and her adorable personality. I smiled when she felt a sneeze coming on in the middle of all that evil! On the other hand, maybe her last name should be Dillon instead of Dallion. Easier to spell and remember! Oh, and the warning from her parents was terrific, but you don't need to add, "it tried to get us numerous times." Just say "something evil is there." I think that's enough to totally hook the reader!

I'll try to read the rest at work - my home computer is acting a little funny. Great job so far!

Oooooh I like this so far. Brilliant writing. You should probably describe the scene changes a little bit more, add details to why it changes, etc. :3

This story has potential, but I wish it was more dramatic and unexpected. The writing is a little simple, as well.

Oh, I found an interesting new read-the writing is a bit simple, but the good kind of simple for once and the daytime (kind of) hallucinations are the highlights because now I can't wait to see just how much Riley Ann will wish she hadn't gone and opened what is practically Pandora's box of crazy.

Not quite the end of the 'cat' I was expecting but okay. It was written well enough.
I jut wish there was more.