LOVED IT! I loved how you described everything, and made it seem like a life-like situation.
I would like to recomend that you write a songfic on the song "Last Christmas." Taylor Swift sang it, and it would complete a great Christmas love story.
WRITE A SEQUEL!
-Kayla

I thought this was a really good story and well written. You do a great job creating the scene with few words. Good job.