Eeeep, PK in trading territory? It's hack! A hack I say! Should not be allowed!

*cough*

Ahem, anyway, loving all the references, hehe. Would love to see how many you'll have by the end of this.

But yes! Phoenix Wright parody all the way! This is funny, likeable characters, and I'm gonna assume an amusing plot.

Just watch the grammar in your speech tags (*_*)
Commas go at the end of the dialogue before the tag, and full stops (or periods, depending on where you're from) go at the end of the speech tag (unless the speech tag is an interjection and the next line of dialogue is a continuation of the dialogue preceding the speech tag.)

Anyway, I am soooo following this :3

Okay, this is quite a decent job. It's funny and entertaining, but the comedy seems to be forced rather than coming out as natural and believable. And you should work on the descriptions, like what I've mentioned in previous chapter. Other than that, another well-done chapter. Please keep up the good work, by good friend.

PS: It feels like a self-insert story. I don't know what to think about this, but perhaps I should be positive about this.

Louis-sama (2012)

A strange and short start, but it's enough to make the readers intrigued. Maybe you can work on your descriptions and words, but other than that, you're doing a good job. So, I shall move forward to the next chapter, and please keep up the good work.

Louis-sama (2012)

Man, there sure is tons of references. But you weaved them nicely and everything turns out funny all right.

The characters were great and amusing. It's always nice when you have a base to work with. (basing them off somebody you are well-acquainted with, in this case it's your friends.)

Not only that, but I feel that dialogues is one of the strong aspect of your writing style, and indeed you have handled it well enough. Very entertaining and flows smoothly. Kudos to you.

Well, like you said it's only the introduction. But I am eager to read more of this story. *checks the follow box*

Ahahaha this really cracked up!

And omg, PK is possible in a trade plaza? I don't wanna be in such a place...

Lol, the turn of events sure is funny and pretty unexpected. Short chapter, but it was amusing enough.