Great chap! I am now very eager to know what makes June strange. This is such a unique story I really can't wait for see what happens in this next chapter.

R xx

Outstanding chapter! I love (and hate) how your keep the suspense about what makes June strange! Keep going!

This chapter really reminded me of something Edgar Allen Poe might write! Awesome job!

Well this is certainly a different story and I like it!

My only comment on it is that whenever your characters are speaking you don't put their quotes in speechmarks ("") rather you put a dash (-). This makes it very hard to distinguish when someone is talking. You put your main character's thoughts in speechmarks, why not the rest?

Anywho...I love the concept of this story and can't wait to read more! I want to find out what is strange about Miss. June :)

R xx