YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY! I want to be the honary maid of honor! And the honary godmother! Oooooh, imagine what a nice grandmother Darren's mother would be! . This was so adorable! I love this epilogue! I'm sad it's done though... :(

Cindi magic! That was cute! Haha, that was funny when she rejected the offer to become a warrior! . I liked the little speech she gave, it was sweet. .

HAHAHAHAHA! In your FACE, Anthony! He's sure getting what he deserved! Magic's his forte, huh? Not anymore! .

Ewwwwww, math! . Awww, this was really cute, ESPECIALLY the end! ;) Ohhhhhh, but Beth and Anthony are such brats!You did an extremely good job at disguising their personalities, I never would've guessed!

OMG! Sorry I've been gone, I've had no internet! I'm so sad I didn't get to comment on your lovely chapters! I still will, even though ypu've already finished. T-T Kawaii is cute in japanese, my friend is taking language classes, so I know. . This chapter was so cute! Her dad was so frickin REAL, I could imagine my dad doing that, haha! It made me laugh! The interaction between Darren and Cindi was super-duper KAWAII! Eek, assassins! They give me nightmares! They're so cold and evil!

I really really love this story, for me it was short and sweet not too much drama which I really liked about it. It was also really easy to understand and flowed very well, so thank you for writing this!

To sum it up: AWESOME! Absolutely loved it. Especially the part of Cindi's magic, that was really cool! Am sad the story is over, but absolutely can't wait to read this new one you're writing. :D

What a beautiful ending! It's so sad and happy at the same time! I love how Darren just disappeared into the crowd of Warriors.

If you reeeeaaaaalllly wanted to write a sequel, which I don't really feel a need for that since this story was so wonderful, you could write it about their kids.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
This chapter is so amazing! I love love love love it!

Oooohhhh he is an asshole! It's such a good story! You should get it published **

Oh hell yeah she killed it! But WTF she turned down her dream?! ... well I guess she can't be a great mother if she has to be a worrior too. Makes sense. LOVE IT!

Me gusta el fin.
In the last chapter i know it was a serious scene, but I just had to smile when you used proper grammar in between all the chaos. "Darren and I"
I really like the way he proposed. Very creative. But I still think he was afraid of touching his bow.

For your sequel, Cindi and Darren's child could be the main, and he/she can have some of Darren's AND Cindi's magic. It could start when they have him/her or when he/her is young, using they're magic early.

Yay! It's finished and it was amazing :) can't wait for your next one :)

I love this chapter so much...I finished the story and came back and reread it. Of course this would go back to the judging ceremony where her magic was all...show-offy and stuff lol. Just reinforces the general opinion that Cindi is complete BAMF.