Two words. Gurren Lagann. That underground sequence is purely inspired by Gurren Lagann and you can't deny it.

I think it's possible to flesh out this chapter a little more than you did. Lengthen the prologue a bit more and fit more dialogue in. And the underground sequence could be stretched a bit more to give us an insight of our main characters.

But screw it, I'm following this. Fictionpress needs some testosterone one can only get from mecha!

Just several words spelled wrong though they're not as many grammatical errors as last time. Well, not that I saw anyway.

As for Genesis, I love the fact that it has a knife XD or sword. Over-glorified knife? Hmm, whatevs. I still like the fact that it fought the Basilisk and beat it. Question: Besides the eye in its mouth, did the Basilisk have any other eyes? Oh, and I kinda wanted to see Skye get it in the eye. I don't know why but I was rooting for that :3 Ah, well. The thing is dead.

In the Leviathan, I like Mythos' name. He's kind of a hardass, huh? I like Lavitus Pires though. His name is awesome too.
Happy Belated Birthday Skye!

-Tenshi, out!

There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but other than that I really enjoyed reading this _

First

I didn't get to say it last time XD

Now, as for the story, my guess was right! I love the colors of Skye's discovery as well. His friends' reactions were pretty funny too. As for that soldier, I think his proclamation was a bit much. Skye had a point when he asked who was he to say that they'd have their supplies cut? Props to Skye speaking his mind. I am still curious about "Arc" I don't know if it was explained yet or I read over it. Oh, and the end was great XD BUt now I have a question. Since the mecha broke a hole in the ceiling of the Village, couldn't the Sin Pilots and Basilisk go down there? O_O

Hmm, what else... There's just a bit of speling errors and you use don't use many pronouns, just there names a lot. Other than that, it was a good chapter.

The beginning bit was awesome. I didn't cry! I didn't though that was quite sad. The Basilisk sounds super epic, as well as the Sin Pilots! Those last word already tell you that something awesome is going to go down.

**Thirteen Years Later**
The detail leaves stuff to the imagination so I content with that. And that thing he had hit while digging? There was a mentioning of a mecha. Was that thing a mecha!? I wanna know!

But its good to see you writing again as well. Update soon

-Tenshi out!