|Reviews for Testament|
| TheBloodEdge 12/2/12 . chapter 1
Two words. Gurren Lagann. That underground sequence is purely inspired by Gurren Lagann and you can't deny it.
I think it's possible to flesh out this chapter a little more than you did. Lengthen the prologue a bit more and fit more dialogue in. And the underground sequence could be stretched a bit more to give us an insight of our main characters.
But screw it, I'm following this. Fictionpress needs some testosterone one can only get from mecha!
| Tenshi no Yami 10/15/12 . chapter 3
Just several words spelled wrong though they're not as many grammatical errors as last time. Well, not that I saw anyway.
As for Genesis, I love the fact that it has a knife XD or sword. Over-glorified knife? Hmm, whatevs. I still like the fact that it fought the Basilisk and beat it. Question: Besides the eye in its mouth, did the Basilisk have any other eyes? Oh, and I kinda wanted to see Skye get it in the eye. I don't know why but I was rooting for that :3 Ah, well. The thing is dead.
In the Leviathan, I like Mythos' name. He's kind of a hardass, huh? I like Lavitus Pires though. His name is awesome too.
Happy Belated Birthday Skye!
| 9STARRyNIGHt7 10/14/12 . chapter 1
There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but other than that I really enjoyed reading this _
| Tenshi no Yami 10/14/12 . chapter 2
I didn't get to say it last time XD
Now, as for the story, my guess was right! I love the colors of Skye's discovery as well. His friends' reactions were pretty funny too. As for that soldier, I think his proclamation was a bit much. Skye had a point when he asked who was he to say that they'd have their supplies cut? Props to Skye speaking his mind. I am still curious about "Arc" I don't know if it was explained yet or I read over it. Oh, and the end was great XD BUt now I have a question. Since the mecha broke a hole in the ceiling of the Village, couldn't the Sin Pilots and Basilisk go down there? O_O
Hmm, what else... There's just a bit of speling errors and you use don't use many pronouns, just there names a lot. Other than that, it was a good chapter.
| Tenshi no Yami 10/13/12 . chapter 1
The beginning bit was awesome. I didn't cry! I didn't though that was quite sad. The Basilisk sounds super epic, as well as the Sin Pilots! Those last word already tell you that something awesome is going to go down.
**Thirteen Years Later**
The detail leaves stuff to the imagination so I content with that. And that thing he had hit while digging? There was a mentioning of a mecha. Was that thing a mecha!? I wanna know!
But its good to see you writing again as well. Update soon