Whoa! This was great. I loved the jaded view point of falling in love. Honestly, I can really relate to this. I've had such bad experiences, witnessed even worse, that I know I don't even want to bother. The resolve in this is fabulous and the rhyming of it makes it flow. It's very easy to read. Thank you for sharing it!

I like how you've put a spin on this old rhyme,and made something that was cheery and bright gloomy.