|Reviews for Dusk|
| electrical moon 10/14/12 . chapter 1
Nice poem! Good imagery, and I love the comparison between you and the moon both borrowing light. The last line is quite good.
| Purple Octopus Badger 10/14/12 . chapter 1
This was very enjoyable to read, the idea with the moon using the sunlight, brilliant
| Naver 10/14/12 . chapter 1
Good imagery and I like the last four lines best. Countine writing poems as great as this! :)