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| Reviews for Dusk |
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   electrical moon 10/14/12 . chapter 1Nice poem! Good imagery, and I love the comparison between you and the moon both borrowing light. The last line is quite good. |
| Purple Octopus Badger 10/14/12 . chapter 1 This was very enjoyable to read, the idea with the moon using the sunlight, brilliant |
| Naver 10/14/12 . chapter 1 Good imagery and I like the last four lines best. Countine writing poems as great as this! :) |
