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ATTENTION READERS: I am truly sorry for the delay and I apologize for the last crappy chapter. I am currently working on the next chapter and the rewritten version of chapter nine. Please be patient because lately a lot has been going on for me. Also, I would love for you guys to check out my other stories. I will also post new chapters for them as well and I will also post new chapters for my fan fiction stories too. Thank you and may you find what you're looking for

Well that escilated quickly! epic chapter 6!

Well Achille is such a drama queen lol, he makes everything seem like a lot more dramatic than they may actually be, i like BiBi she's my favorite gal'! i hope you make her awsomer! update soon :)

Thanks for updating despite the limited amount of time you have!

Oh! so that's how she was walking lol. Hmmmm, well could you please make BiBi not be his victim? like could there perhaps be a sort of twist where she's more than she seems? idk i just dont want her to be all weak and stuff. And could you perhaps let her have her body back? pleeeeeaaaseeee? well UPDATE SOON ;)

OH! hey! this is getting intreastiiiiiiing lol how is BiBi walking? i thought she didnt have her legs? oh and yes i know you cant reply because i am reviwing as a guest (i have no idea wats up with the green elf man pic thing) so yea but for you ill login later and try revewing once again :D either way UPDATE SOON! XD

Isn't zone de passe oublié forgotten zone?
I'm not completely sure, my French isn't the best, honestly.
But to more important points, I love this story!
It's really easy to read, and includes French which is the only other language I know.

Gahh! you finally updated! could you make BiBi like more powerful? Dont let her be his victim, turn thetables and do the otehr way around. His a "soul keeper" so im guessing that his friends or "victims" souls are trapped inside those lifeless dolls thanks to him? Either way could you come up with something that way BiBi can have all her body parts back? or something of the like where she gets more power and strenghth thanks to something and is granted her body back or something please!? well anyways UPDATE SOON! { i hope you can see this} TT-TT

Gahh! you finally updated! could you make BiBi like more powerful? Dont let her be his victim, turn thetables and do the otehr way around. His a "soul keeper" so im guessing that his friends or "victims" souls are trapped inside those lifeless dolls thanks to him? Either way could you come up with something that way BiBi can have all her body parts back? or something of the like where she gets more power and strenghth thanks to something and is granted her body back or something please!? well anyways UPDATE SOON!

i started reading and by the time i got to the end of the page i found myself clicking next, and i though crap. im interested.” which kinda sucks cuz its kinda lame.

YAY! you updated, and its awsome! (though i do belive that he really is mad and that Amandine is just a fixment of his imagination) i kinda hope she is or something idk i just want him with BiBi (though again i worry if they can betogether? i mean in the end she'll end up being just a head!) so yea im intrestead as to how this will turn out please UPDATE SOON! and i really hope you can see this cuz i cant, AGAIN ;A;

YAY! you updated, and its awsome! (though i do belive that he really is mad and that Amandine is just a fixment of his imagination) i kinda hope she is or something idk i just want him with BiBi (though again i worry if they can betogether? i mean in the end she'll end up being just a head!) so yea im intrestead as to how this will turn out please UPDATE SOON!

Update soon please!

Fudging AWSOME! Update soon oh and I want him with the body parts girl NOT with amandine please!? Oh it's your story just keep making it AWSOME! ;)