|Reviews for The Attic|
| Lia Jenson 11/6/12 . chapter 1
I would love your stories if not for the mistakes!
I'd add you as a favorite, if not for this bad structure and punctuation. I can't even concentrate on the build-up of suspense 'cause my eyes can't. Stop. Catching them!
This paranoia is that which I've been feeling a lot lately, so I can relate, except I opt for firearms. Better to shoot first and pay property damages later.