|Reviews for Autumn, butterflies, and birds|
| silence Lady 11/21/12 . chapter 2
| toto23 11/16/12 . chapter 1
it is ok
| Winter 10/23/12 . chapter 1
Such descriptive language. I like it!
Ooo, this is probably me fave because of the first line. But than thids close too wich brings me too...
I love this one as well. I like the colour description very much. May I have some more? XD
| bktierney 10/21/12 . chapter 1
I like these, not many people give a thought to the fact that haikus are meant to not only be in a pattern but be about nature. They skip over that, not realizing that you can address nature and still touch on emotions and deeper sentiments. I think that was some of the beauty of Japanese haikus: they had meaning beyond the obvious. Your haikus speak of beauty and grace, freedom, and the power of nature. I like it. Well done.