Well, FictionPress has decided it doesn't want to let me log on, so I'm reviewing this way. That was an epic conclusion to a brilliant story. Loved every part of it.

how do you train heroin? isnt that a drug? what do you do?

"STAYYYY. STAYYYYY. goooooood heroin."
I mean it your life. Is there a leash for your heroin? is your herion named sparky? i dont have heroin. you know why? YOLO THATS WHY. keeping it safe. You should get rid of heroin. Its dangerous. and from what i can tell from your story (or from the sentence i can see on the screen) your heroin is 12 years old. Again...Its your life but ...whatever.

-The Superhero With Out A Cape

I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it! Ria is totally a girl who doesn't go down without a fight and never lets anything get her down. She came back from the dead and laughed at it! Ria is so amazing and this is such an amazing story! Good work!

Very good! I especially liked this chapter!
ONWARD! (after some lunch and stuff...) B)

Hm, this is certainly something for me to ponder over. I will keep reading! :)
ONWARD!

Send me congrats to Zane :P

I loved this story and hope you'll write more as funny and different as this one!

-ABW

Got globs...this is how it ends? That was messed up. She finally was happy after all she went through and poof.

What is up with Ria and men? There is Ash, Damien, and Zane. First she likes Ash, then she meets Zane(which is the one I would prefer her to be with) and she feels more strongly for him than for ash, but now there is Damien, who I can tell likes her, and she says she prefers green eyes. Who is THE guy?! I can't tell. (Please let it be Zane, Please let it be Zane)

Thnxs for lovin my story; I love yurs too!

A few thing though: Tell Damie to back off cause Ria already has Zanie-pooh! I mean it!

grr!

Which brings me to my next thing:

Who the he ever heard of and un-attractive vamire. I never knew such a thing was possiblem XD! And his breath smelled like garlic?!

Tha's just classic.

-ABW

I love your name too (no kiddin; its Coolio!)And thanks ror answering my updating! I really enjoy the story so far!

So, I think there may be something wrong with her life. I love your story, please keep writing. And yeah, Tigrah does awesome reviews.

Loving it so far! :)

hi i am ur new follower and it's a good story and i like the main character ria as she is very bold and dark clothes loving and how she hates to keep writing i like ur writing and i would love read the whole story soon

I love the name spiderweb! Wonder what Sw will name her! A question: can our Nymph friends talk to Sw?

My jaw just fell down a drain of some sort because of how awesome this is! Yes I know that makes no sense, but this is so seriously amazing! I can't even contain it. Keep up the awesomeness, and I can't wait till tomorrow, so I can read more of this fantastic story! ;)