|Reviews for How to train your heroine|
| cool sapc 12/3/12 . chapter 7
XDDDDDD Okay, Ria! I'll review, just for you! XD
This chapter is awesome! In a way, I'm glad that Ria finally didn't have to be around those two coupley people. In another way, HOW COULD THEY GIVE HER ALL OF THE HARD ASSIGNMENTS?! I mean, really! "I have to go get a sword, priest water, and a murder who died of a natural death's eye. It's so hard..." COME ON! WHY?
By the way, I see where the whole mermaid and town thing is going... uh-huh. *winks* I knew EXACTLY where it's going...
| dixicorn 12/1/12 . chapter 6
Poor you...hope life gets easier for you.
| Lorana 11/29/12 . chapter 6
Well even though you said the whole Ria/Ash thing was too easy. What happened in this chapter could also work especially if Ria continues to have her feelings for Ash. She would be trying to convince herself it was bound to happen since she knows all the men fall for Cass to try and cope. Judging by her personality she may even start lashing out at Ash in particular to get over her hurt feelings, and return to treating him like she used to. Later on in the story Cass and Ash may break up and Ash realize he actually like Ria more and then has a hell of a time trying to convince Ria about it.
Also seemed extremely fast for the two of them to develop feelings in a matter of hours. / Maybe they eventually notice she is depressed; because she again is the third wheel and this time it being someone she likes so she has a tougher time hiding her feelings.
Really feel bad for Ria that she is basically forgotten even by her friends. (even if they are on a quest to help her) I'm sure at some point Cass will realize that she does things that unintentional hurt Ria.
Just some thoughts of things that may work plus may add some drama that wakes Cass up with how Ria feels. Such as her not wanting to duel Cass because she knows she would lose to her.
| cool sapc 11/29/12 . chapter 6
I WILL KILL YOU! GRRRRRR! XD
Yeah, and I know how you feel. It IS hard when people don't know the real you. When they don't understand you. Sometimes-for me, at least-it's like, "I don't care" but other times it really hurts. I hop things get worked out with you and your family. :')
Oh, and to answer your question, the sapc part of my username came from my initials. The cool part I just started adding because some people had already taken sapc (don't ask me why, XD)
Yeah, I usually just have a little family party. I don't usually get to go out with friends. *sigh*
I eagerly await the next chapter! (Truthfully, I was kind of thinking/hoping that Ria would leave the two lover-birds. You know, just take her horse and run)
| cool sapc 11/7/12 . chapter 5
Okay, so, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
| cool sapc 11/5/12 . chapter 4
OH...MY...GOSH! I am LOVING you right now! And it's so funny, because (I told you about how I had the character named Safire? Well...) I was thinking about a twist which I won't give away, but it involves Safire and a guy named Ashton (ASHTON) or Ash! XD Yeah, the reason his name is like that is because it has to do more or less with Safire... but I can't give away details! DX
Plus, I absolutely love Ash! As soon as you first described him, I'm like, "Awwwww... Ria and him were made for eachother!" XD It looks like I was right!
*takes cookie* Nomnomnom... thank you!... it was chocolate chip, right?... wait a minute... chocolate chips don't move. XDDDDDD Just kidding.
| dixicorn 11/2/12 . chapter 4
What i lke about Cass, is her flirtatieos cool,calm and collected manner.
Only she could kick but in a dress! C:
| Chola13 10/26/12 . chapter 3
Okay, amazing story still but I would consider using more commas because it would make it easier to understand and occasionally it gets confusing... As for your offer Ill accept :) PM me what me what you want from my services and what your next step is :) xxx Nicole xx
| dixicorn 10/25/12 . chapter 3
Ria is awsome.
Expecially in this chapter!
Hmmm breath, sound deadly! As well writton as usual! C:
| cool sapc 10/25/12 . chapter 3
:D This is awesome! But, I must say, I ABSOLUTELY HATE CLIFFHANGERS! XD
Update soon, please!
| cool sapc 10/25/12 . chapter 2
I want my cookie! XD I'm looking forward to reading more! ;)
| cool sapc 10/25/12 . chapter 1
Wow! This looks pretty cool! And I think I've got a bit of both Ria and Cass. XD
And actually, it's kind of funny because I have a character in a book of mine who was originally named Sapphire. I changed the spelling, though, so it's Safire now. [She has the power of fire, so therefore, Sa"fire". ;) ]
However, it get's kind of confusing sometimes because you don't have apostrophe's or periods where they should go. At least, not all of time. :)
| Chola13 10/18/12 . chapter 2
Wow! I know ur exact feeling :) still love Ria but I want to know what's wrong with her eyes and why :) please update soon please, the need to read more is getting to me ;D oh and when she freaked out with the blood I couldn't stop laughing, it was ironic :) haha xx Nicole xx
| buttermybeer 10/17/12 . chapter 1
This story is really good. It's definitely one of the more unique ones out there. Just please please please use more commas.
"Be back soon dear," My father called.
"Okay!" I said, waving at him.
Seriously takes two seconds and your audience will love you for it:D
| dixicorn 10/16/12 . chapter 1
Haha, this is good!