|Reviews for Across the Stars|
| americanhoney139 12/10/12 . chapter 19
I love the title of this chapter. I also like the juxtaposition of going from the alien struggle in chapter 18 to the realization in chapter 19 that they are missing.
| lf1957 12/7/12 . chapter 17
I would love to know how you came up with the language. It's really, really cool. Does it sound as weird as it looks?
| lf1957 12/7/12 . chapter 14
Is there a love triangle coming?
| lf1957 12/7/12 . chapter 9
Beautiful image of Wren seeing her mother for the first time.
| lf1957 12/7/12 . chapter 5
I love that her name is Wren. It really evokes a picture in my mind of what she may look like.
| lf1957 12/5/12 . chapter 2
I really like the flashback. I was wondering how it all began.
| lf1957 12/5/12 . chapter 1
I love the opening sentence. It pulls me right in to the story!
| Rory 11/1/12 . chapter 3
I think this is really good so far! There are a couple of errors that I think could have been fixed by a quick check after you were finished writing, but maybe you just missed them when you were looking it over. Regardless, I'm looking forward to more!
| Aria Taylor 10/17/12 . chapter 1
Wow. You're off to a good start.
I've never read Across the Universe. Is it good?