|Reviews for Himitsu to Hoshi|
| YelloweyesofGreed 12/9/12 . chapter 1
This is horrible. The prose is badly made and I'm not one for Crossdressing. I won't be reading this anymore than I have. Ugh.
| Felrain 11/30/12 . chapter 3
Youve done a good job on this! Keep it up'
| Alyksandra Barqada 11/1/12 . chapter 1
AWESOME! *applauds with great enthusiasm*
| Jax Creation 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Haha this is adorable :3 Very shojo-manga-like!
(I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for bishies and gender-benders XD)
Really well written and I love what I've read so far!
Only thing I want to point out is that you seem to be missing a section break when the POV changes from Reika and Yui to Ai [just before "One floor up"]
Also, keep an eye on your tenses. You've accidentally slipped from past to present tense at some points [e.g. 4th paragraph: "Reika stares after Yui..."]
Other than those small things, it's pretty much impeccable :3
Great work guys, can't wait to read more! I'm definitely subscribing (and adding you to the School Life Manga community.)
| Lavender Town Massacre 10/22/12 . chapter 1
This is awesome!
| DefineReality 10/22/12 . chapter 1
It's interesting, good job!