Haha! "And most of all, she belched like no other." XD

Kuromori - nice name! luv it

keep up the good work!

Anata garasu no me de donna yume wo

Mirareru no?

Mirareru no...?

Mata atashi

Kokoro ga sakete

Nagarederu

Tsukurotta

Sukima ni sasaru

Kioku tachi...

-Translating Using my limited Japanese-

What dream can you see with your glass eye?

What can you see?

Again my (female) *something i dont understand*

The memories

The character was built quite well, I found it a little wierd I found this in 'fantasy' rather than manga...

Let guess, Isanu's based on you? Quite a nice start and I enjoyed it Quite curious what the necklace does...

Be careful and I suggest more proof reading to be done (I could see a few mistakes...)