Very well-done. I can imagine this poem set w/ that movie "The Last Samurai".
The movie is aboutJapan during the Meiji restoration of the late nineteenth century, though it is about the self-discovery of an American, this poem is fit for any immigrant/emigrant.
Why does British-English always have to look neater and better than American-English? *sigh*
For some reason it seems more... correct to me, so to say. Heh.
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Seein that I hope to emigrate to Japan, i liked this poem!

wow this is a really good poem it realy represents Japan

Whoo, shibby. Although it sounded a bit like you were talking 'bout China instead, with it being so overly poppulated and much more recognised for that problem then other countries. But then again, I don't know much 'bout Japan other than the anime. ;V Awesome poem! I'm gonna go read your other one now!