|Reviews for To Catch and Fall|
| Scribble Scribe 4/21/13 . chapter 11
First of all I'll quote my reaction to seeing in my alerts that you'd updated. "Yay! Another chapter! Finally!"
Now, having read it, I can tell you it is still as well written and fun to read as ever and I am really looking forward to more. :)
| bookworm121197 4/19/13 . chapter 11
I don't normally read stories involving zombies but To Catch and Fall kinda drew me in. It is so well written and very descriptive which makes me imagine every little detail. Cannot wait to read more xxc
| Guest 2/8/13 . chapter 9
You left us hanging there! Please update soon I might die!
| TheRightToWrite 2/6/13 . chapter 1
I honestly cannot get over how addicted and well written this story is. This chapter literally made me shiver! (:
I say this with complete honesty; this is by far one of the best stories I've read on here.
Well done, and I'm anxious to read more!
| Scribble Scribe 2/2/13 . chapter 9
The most intense chapter so far. I had chills. Write on :)
| Pastoria Levior 2/1/13 . chapter 9
| Pastoria Levior 1/29/13 . chapter 8
So far I am loving this story. The characters are great and believable and the plot is rich and page-turning. Looking forward to the chapters to come. I'll be following!
| Guest 1/14/13 . chapter 8
why? why are you doing this to me?! what did I ever do to you/ I love this story and the one on fanfiction. I understand that your busy and all but I need more! and fast I could die without it!
BYE! from- Dying for more!?
| TheRightToWrite 1/15/13 . chapter 8
Oh my God.
Words cannot express how much I'm loving this story. Your writing style is just perfect and the story line is addicting. I also love how you divided the chapters into "then" and "now". It reminds my of the way one of my favorite authors write.
I'm already fangirling over the Ember and Holden pairing.
I honestly have nothing bad to say about this story so far.
Please continue updating and keep up the good work! :D
| Guest 1/9/13 . chapter 8
Im the reader of your story on fan fiction that keeps begging for more. well now that I read this whole story, like I said I would try to do, im going to get on my knees and double beg for more chapters of both!
bye from- Dying for more!
| RuggedLines 12/7/12 . chapter 7
I am ridiculously obsessed with this fantastic series. Twelve billion thumbs up!
| Phyra Sparks 11/26/12 . chapter 6
please write more and soon! You got me hooked!
| AprilBaby98 11/19/12 . chapter 5
Chapter five is awesome! I truly love it and am very curious to find out what happened to the rest of her family. Keep writing!
| AprilBaby98 11/15/12 . chapter 1
I am really liking where this is going. Keep writing, it sounds great so far and I am already hooked and wanting more!
| AThousandPromises 11/11/12 . chapter 1
I really love this story, I have actually read all the way to chapter 4, at which point I realized it would be nice to at least leave a couple reviews. I couldn't really stop reading long enough to review, but I have managed to, clearly.
So I love how different this is. I kind of skimmed the summary and was like "Oh, this seems like a typical zombie story" (not insulting your summary writing abilities), but I decided I would read it because it did seem like it would be interesting at least. And I really liked it.
My only criticisms are: The 'unknown' cause of the zombies- I hope this will be explained, because I personally don't like unexplained apocalypses, I mean, every good zombie story will have a cause behind the zombies (i.e. cancer vaccine gone wrong, disease, God's anger at humans... etc.). The length of the flashback 'then' parts (this is referring to other chapters, because there are no flashbacks in this chapter)- I don't like the shortness. Those sections are too brief, they provide good opportunity for some history on the plot. USE THE WINDOW OF OPPORTUNITY.
I also think the introduction of small, brief characters like Andrew won't really work, because with such a small section of writing, you can't suddenly add new characters, because it's hard for them to be a REAL character (you know, with more than one trait and personality).