Wow. That was...

What the heck? _

The revelation that it was the narrator who was the abuser was a bit of a shock to me. At first I thought the person the floor was a mother or child and the narrator was the comforting savior. Hmm. The reminiscing was almost like foreshadowing for a gruesome end. I was just not expecting the ending. xD

An interesting look into the mind of an abuser. Good work!

Velvet.

This is really good! Not really a YA as such but I love all the psychological aspects to it.
-C'S'xxx