|Reviews for Drugstore Cowboy|
| Mr. Oompa Loompa 4/4/13 . chapter 1
Nice beginning! ;)
This story looks promising already.
| shonenguy 10/21/12 . chapter 1
That was cool... The premise is familiar, but interesting, and I like Shotaro's rudeness, haha. The Black Smile seems pretty corrupted, forcing him to join like that.
| Jax Creation 10/21/12 . chapter 1
This is AWESOME!
Love the premise—kind of similar to Revenant actually what with the soul draining and that (o.O)—eh, but who cares. This is sooooo cooool! *fangirl squeals*
"Shotaro walked over to his teacher and stared at his hair piece, analyzing it from all angles."—lmao, could totally see this bit happening in my head, anime-style XD
Uwaaaah ! The old man attack was really well written... I hate it when there's just one person walking behind me... Especially when they're really close and seem to be following you... Gah, that was really creepy! (TT_TT)
"Shotaro Minami, would you like to join the Black Smile?" / "No." — Ahaha! He has an awesome personality!
Great job Dan-nii! Gonna subscribe to this one. It's gonna be kick-ass! :3
Couple of nit-picky things:
*The bolded words displaying the setting are unnecessary. The location is pretty easy to gauge from what actually happens in each section.
*If you're going to capitalise Impetus, make sure it's always capitalised!
*Watch your grammar in dialogue.