|Reviews for lost at sea|
| InkWitch 4/9/13 . chapter 17
This speaks to me personally. It hurts and it feels good to know that there are people who get it. If this is a true story, thank you for sharing it. If it's not, I admire your ability to step into somebody's shoes so firmly, even when you know that the sight they have is bleak and cold.
You made me cry.
| electrical moon 3/28/13 . chapter 16
Lovely! I adore the formatting with the steps. T adds so much to the poem. Brilliant! Would you mind if I tried it?
| tolerate 3/18/13 . chapter 1
Great flow and I like your choice of words. The last two stanzas felt breathless but beautiful. Lovely poem.
| InkWitch 3/18/13 . chapter 1
I feel like you're talking to God.
At least, that's how I interpret this poetry.
What was your vision for it?
| electrical moon 3/2/13 . chapter 11
I loved the last two lines! Gorgeous and suggestive.
| alexithymic 2/5/13 . chapter 2
i like the little A/N things at the ends of your poetry
| alexithymic 2/5/13 . chapter 1
i like the imagery and overall this was nice. i can relate to it.
| electrical moon 1/23/13 . chapter 6
Love this pillowbook! You've got some really original imagery and I love the way you twist phrases (like "chivalry is dead anyways" in the last poem). Keep it up!