This speaks to me personally. It hurts and it feels good to know that there are people who get it. If this is a true story, thank you for sharing it. If it's not, I admire your ability to step into somebody's shoes so firmly, even when you know that the sight they have is bleak and cold.
You made me cry.

Lovely! I adore the formatting with the steps. T adds so much to the poem. Brilliant! Would you mind if I tried it?

Great flow and I like your choice of words. The last two stanzas felt breathless but beautiful. Lovely poem.

I feel like you're talking to God.
At least, that's how I interpret this poetry.

What was your vision for it?

I loved the last two lines! Gorgeous and suggestive.

i like the little A/N things at the ends of your poetry

i like the imagery and overall this was nice. i can relate to it.
-bones

Love this pillowbook! You've got some really original imagery and I love the way you twist phrases (like "chivalry is dead anyways" in the last poem). Keep it up!