|Reviews for Haikus Anyone?|
| bs13 10/29/12 . chapter 1
wow, these are really good.
| Guest 10/23/12 . chapter 1
I like this. The beauty of nature as summer become fall and the first one is just a masterpeice.
"Black skies dim the eye"
Wonderful use of the word dim. Such a rare thing to find.
"Slowing down all my wild dreams"
That wild dreams part speaks to me. We are so caught up in our wild fantasies in the day yet they slow come evening.
"Bleeding hate all over"
Yes! Hate does tend to spread in the evening as well as calm.
The rest is good too.